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The Ballad of the Sun by ~RoxyrGX:iconRoxyrGX:



The Ballad of the Sun

I went for a walk last Sunday
And saw children holding guns
They closed their eyes and crossed themselves
While their so-called God looked on

Then later, I saw a man hung
For the colour of his skin
When I asked what the man had done
They said 'being was his sin'

Then I looked up at the red sky
And I could not see the sun
It seemed as though it could not lie
And could only scream and run

So I sighed, and kept on walking
In the knee-deep pools of blood
With sorrowed widows crying
Their tears adding to the flood

Then I went into the city
And imagine my surprise
When I saw no glimpse of pity
And instead found empty smiles

These things now merely tire me
And I now just cannot cry
Like the sun, I can only scream
Before I say goodbye.
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I'm quite pleased with how this poem worked out, especially since I essentially pulled this out of my arse.

I just wrote this after seeing a news report that I was outraged about, but I can't remember what it was exactly.

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lovely.

god bless,

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Could it be?

Aesthetically pathetic.

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wow, very nicely written! great job! sorry it took me so long to read ^^;

i like how you kept the rhythm and rhyme scheme throughout it :)

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Very powerful words. It reminded me of a perspective of hell, or some dark and devastated world. Kind of like hell in the movie What Dreams May Come. Witnessing pain everywhere.

Good piece =)

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that was VERY good. it really gets you thinking about all the horrible things in this world...

you wrote it wonderfully!

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Very good, reminds me of my own writing :]

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Wow, that's amazing :clap: I love it

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nice imagery, I especially like the subject matter.

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